We’ve been working on this so hard and for so long, that we’re punch drunk, but it’s getting there: almost a full first act. Neighborhood of 30,000 words. How tired are we? Here’s our last exchange in Saturday’s Campfire, after she posted her edit of Chapter 4:

So the bakery has suddenly become EXTREMELY important–actually, looking back on it now, this was inevitable given our love for food in general and baked goods in particular–so of course I googled for bakeries.

So there’ve been some changes.